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![]() Havent resized this one yet plus im getting tired tonight but thought you guys might want to see what it looks like so far. Im having trouble right now keeping a uniquenes to all these toons without making them completely foriegn. http://www.xzilledstudios.com/zelious.jpg |
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Its a walking prune! Nice coloring but theres something about it ... |
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![]() Not bad. I've seen some of your other work that I liked better. If you can accept some criticism, the head looks very awkard, a little disproportional. Other than that, I like it. Really like the armor. And no offense Banton. Sig is great, but it's fvckin killin my machine. |
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![]() I am going to pretend I know a little something about art for 2 seconds. Iwka's sig looks really cool and seems to capture some essence about her (well, from what I know of her...which is not much, but based on her previous sigs *giggles*). Zelious, I have seen IG. He's mysterious and menacing LOOKING and is a pretty sexy DE. He is also goofy (IN A GOOD WAY!). It might be the countenance of his face and the brightly colored armor (bright red and green). The face has a somewhat leathery appearance. The action hero pose is cute. And good dental hygiene is a must for all superheroes. *hugs* |
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![]() I like it overall. I love the pose and nice coloring. In the way of constructive criticism, the red eye is a sliver too wide (long) for the face. At first, I thought the jaw looked a little off as well, but as I studied it, I think the neck is too far back (thick?). I think if the back of the head and neck were brought in to about where that crease in the neck is (above the collar) it would look more proportional. Maybe a happy medium between those places. I'd leave the collar where it is, just increase the gap between his neck and it. Aside from that, awesome work. Keep at it. |
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![]() The right hand looks a little small, too. And I agree about the positioning of the head and neck. Just looks like something is wrong there. |
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![]() I tried to go for a more dynamic positioning , But like you guys I dont like it at all so ill go with I had in mind first. This is why I post stuff here for other opinions on things if i just went on mine you guys would never see any art cause i think it all blows. |
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![]() I dunno why but when I look at his armor, I just start thinking of Jak & Daxter and the Precursors... It must be the little grooves, I dunno.. Other than a few nuances, it's a good picture. |
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![]() It's very busy... I think the one of Iwka is perfect though. ![]() |
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![]() Zelious has a leathery face in RL too ![]() |
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